Another story full of lovely descriptions. You know, I think that’s my favorite part about your writing. You have such excellent descriptions; it’s just amazing. I want to mention the layout on this story. It’s so simple, but so very beautiful and it works. I love how it’s red – it really fits with the vampire theme. Also, the banner is just pure loveliness. :) (Also, going to warn you right now – I’m commenting as I read it, so this thing may end up being huge. O.o)
OH MY GOSH MORE KEVIN! I never liked the Jonas Brothers, but Kevin was always my least favorite of them anyway. You’ve made me fall in love with him, though.
Ugh, this is sexy. I love the part where Mike’s slipping and just decides to do it and kiss him. <3 Ah, and now Brendon Urie! I am dying of the utter sexiness right now. I don’t read bandfics. I dooooon’t. But poo, this is fantastic. I repeat myself much too often when it comes to your writing, but I feel like it’s always necessary.
Kevin is just so adorable. I love how you portray him. He’s so cute and innocent and perfect. <3 I love how he’s babbling about how he thinks he’s cute in a little kid kind of way and he’s okay with not being ruggedly handsome.
SO MANY DIFFERENT GUYS GOING ON. O.O Pete Wentz, I’m assuming that’s William Beckett he keeps mentioning, Brendon, Ryan Ross?, Kevin…gaaaaar.
I just adore the way your characters interact. It’s like I’m watching a movie instead of reading a story.
THE LAST CHAPTER THE LAST CHAPTER. So so so amazing. I can’t believe this doesn’t have any comments. It deserves so much more than measly little me gushing over how amazing it is. xD
I love your descriptions, your characters, the flow, the writing…absolutely nothing to concrit. NOTHING. Amazing, extraordinary job, as usual. <3 Haven
August 1st, 2011 at 03:37am
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OH MY GOSH MORE KEVIN! I never liked the Jonas Brothers, but Kevin was always my least favorite of them anyway. You’ve made me fall in love with him, though.
Ugh, this is sexy. I love the part where Mike’s slipping and just decides to do it and kiss him. <3 Ah, and now Brendon Urie! I am dying of the utter sexiness right now. I don’t read bandfics. I dooooon’t. But poo, this is fantastic. I repeat myself much too often when it comes to your writing, but I feel like it’s always necessary.
Kevin is just so adorable. I love how you portray him. He’s so cute and innocent and perfect. <3 I love how he’s babbling about how he thinks he’s cute in a little kid kind of way and he’s okay with not being ruggedly handsome.
SO MANY DIFFERENT GUYS GOING ON. O.O Pete Wentz, I’m assuming that’s William Beckett he keeps mentioning, Brendon, Ryan Ross?, Kevin…gaaaaar.
I just adore the way your characters interact. It’s like I’m watching a movie instead of reading a story.
THE LAST CHAPTER THE LAST CHAPTER. So so so amazing. I can’t believe this doesn’t have any comments. It deserves so much more than measly little me gushing over how amazing it is. xD
I love your descriptions, your characters, the flow, the writing…absolutely nothing to concrit. NOTHING. Amazing, extraordinary job, as usual.
<3 Haven