Small Town Girl - Comments

I really like this story but there is just too much damn repetition about Zaky feeling guilty for dating Kayla and Gena at the same time!!! We all know how he feels why does it need to be repeated over and over again. Jfc. Yeah I can't read it anymore. Way too much repetition for both of them.

Why is there so much lip licking in your stories? The stories are really good but damn it seem like every sentence someone is licking or wetting their lips! Weird!

This story was... i cant even put into words how Awesome this story was. i am so glad things ended happily:) keep up the great work, you are an amazing writer.

i loved it but i think she should have left him a little longer, he never should have asked her to be his girlfriend when he was still dating Gena. but i liked it, it could have been cool if you had her like get pregnant and come back a couple years later to tell him he had a kid or something, more drama and provides us with a longer story!

Is there going to be a sequel???because I really love this story,and I really want to know what is going to happen with this lovely couple in future)))
sooo please write a sequel????
Love you*
-Julia

LOVED IT. Depressed it's over but, it was yet another amazing story.

Yay!!
Loved this story!!

great ending

ADORABLE <3
I'm so happy that they got a happy ending :]
Yet, I'm am very sad that this story is over...
It was a great story though :D

I'm so sad this story has finished! I loved it! Will be one to read again!

Too cute!! Loved this story!

I looooooooved it. It was fucking amazing. I loved Zackys way to win her back. This ending was amazing.
Love ya
Ps. I know you don't do sequels buuut this one totally calls for one soooo please please I'm begging you to do one. :,)

Loved it :D

Awee yay!! Loved that he drove there to see her and I'm happy she forgave him ^^
looming forward to your next story!

This was definitely a great story. Loved the ending! :)

I know you don't do sequels and all, but this story totally calls for one!
Part of me is upset that she is giving into him so easily and then the other part of me is really happen that she hasn't shut him out completely.
<3 Michele

This was such an amazing finale for a wonderful story, Whitney. It seriously made me tear up a little bit to know that he had flown all the way to North Dakota to see her and prove to her that he loved her, and I'm glad that she accepted that and gave him another chance. Especially since her heart was with him as well. It's always lovely to see two people get back together when they're in love, and especially in this story. I can't believe you wrote this epic piece of amazingness for me; it's all just so wonderful and beautiful and I just love it to pieces! I know I'll definitely be reading this time and time agian, Whitney. It's beautiful, and you're an amazing writer. :)

Fly Zacky FLY

Zacky better drive like a mad man!!

wonder if she will give him a second chance now
loved the update