Three-Fourths - Comments

  • aubs

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    I know enough about the boys of Big Time Rush to truly enjoy this one-shot. I would have to say that this was a perfect story for the quote. Something I really liked about this was how you explained the traits that James picked up from his friends and how you compared James to his friends. I also liked how you brought all of the boys past into the one-shot, especially James'. Overall, I really enjoyed this one-shot; it was wonderful and the layout is beautiful too.
    May 30th, 2011 at 10:12pm
  • die Bienen Knie

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    First of all, I'm a fan of BTR so this made me enjoy the story even more and the layout was pretty fantastic. I thought your descriptions were great and I liked the concept you wrote about. I did feel like parts of it were a bit tedious and I did wish there was more of a story but at the same time I realize that wasn't what you were going for and I can appreciate that.
    May 14th, 2011 at 10:49pm
  • die Bienen Knie

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    First of all, I'm a fan of BTR so this made me enjoy the story even more and the layout was pretty fantastic. I thought your descriptions were great and I liked the concept you wrote about. I did feel like parts of it were a bit tedious and I did wish there was more of a story but at the same time I realize that wasn't what you were going for and I can appreciate that.
    May 14th, 2011 at 10:49pm
  • the apex predator;;

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    omg, Big Time Rush. I love them. <3

    This was so gorgeously written. I totally agree; James does seem like he's made up of everyone that he knows. You can see it just by watching him. Yeah, there's that little bit of James charm that defines him as the eyecandy of the group and the one that can pick up girls and so on but there's so much hiding behind that exterior. (Bet Nickelodeon didn't think BTR would be so looked into by a bunch of teenage girls that write fanfiction, huh? xD) This just captured everything that I think is going on in his head perfectly. The wording was gorgeous, the feelings were perfectly described, and it was just utterly flawless.

    I wish this was a longer comment but I'm speechless. :'3
    April 26th, 2011 at 03:53am