When the Songbird Does Not Sing - Comments

Layout: I'm a sucker for original made layouts and you did an amazing job.The layout works really wall with the story.

I like how each chapter is named. Also, I never heard of the myth about twins, this is a really nice base to the story. I do not like insest at all, but I will not let that be a factor for my comment. Sorry if that was rude.

The spelling and grammer are really good. I like the way the story flows from chapter to chapter, and paragraph to paragraph. Sometimes when a story has more then one point of few it can get confusing, but you seemed to have mastered the ability of two point of views in one story. Good work! I like the history of the twins and how you included it as a chapter instead of stating in the summery that they were orphans/ being adopted. The history of this story is really interesting. This is one of the best things I have ever read on Mibba. I'm going to be checking out a few other stories of yours so, if you get a any subscribers to a story it's me. lol
You have got talent, keep up the good work! :)

I know you wanted me to read another story,but I came across this story I hope you don't mind. I like how big the words were.

I love ur story!!
Rhis is amazing
I hope you add more

i really like this story. mike is so sweet amd heather too. Amazing writing.

this is aff to a good start. but the layout is a little much. It hard to read the words. maybe is you tweaked the layout it would look more apealing.