Kindle a Light - Comments

I love stories that are just dialogue; I can't write them but I absolutely adore reading them. For some reason, I also really enjoyed that you didn't have set characters for this; it'll just let us create our own characters. As I read however, I really pictured the Doctor and Rory and that isn't because they're my OTP. xD I'm not sure if that was what you were going for but you did a great job at capturing his personality regardless. The conversation just flowed so perfectly as well; your flow is always, always perfect but this was... super perfect, if this makes sense. I really don't have criticism to offer, to be honest; you developed both characters so well by only using dialogue, dialogue that sounded completely and utterly natural. I really can't help but picture the Doctor and Rory now, so I might just have to read this again.

since its nothing but a dialouge reading, theres not much to go on. :P you did good with it tho. and those with imaginations can make their own story with the dialouge. good job.

I think that was absolutely freaking brilliant. I don't know where to begin. The absence of everything but dialogue really worked for this piece and the conversations were on the brink of nonsense. In saying that, the nonsense was in an ordered fashion and was very easily visualised. "Are you really here?" "I don't know..am I?" I found it all ultimately amusing and a joy to read. Well done.