Something I Could Hold Onto - Comments

that was an awesome update =D

more soon?

susie x

ps. sorry, that was the blandest most unhelpful comment in the world. i'm suffering from comment writers block, i'll leave something better next update =D

Grr, yeah. I went back to change the ending because I blanked on a few sentences; it's all fixed now if you'd like to go back and double check :]] It's a little more cohesive with the flow, and clears up a little bit of confusion.

KranK:

then again ive never driven from jersey to NY with a stranger and then rocked out and watched a movie with them...it might be normal to grow that close! (:

It definitely seems like it could be an effective form of bonding, no? :]] But you're right, I went back and re-read the chapter; it didn't sound the way I hoped it would T.T

Cherry Road:

All right, so I snuck online tonight and your story is the first I see when I click on the stories link. Boy, was I not disappointed. Very Happy

I have to say, I really like the premise of it, how there's basically only Frank and Gerard in this story (though that's only so far - I'm almost positive you'll include some other characters soon).

I think your writing style is great, but I found a few mistakes - one was an obvious typo and the other was simply because you forgot a word - though neither of them are something you should worry about.

I'm greatly anticipating more (soon, hopefully?) and I'll definitely be subscribing. Smiley

<3 C

-Inhale gasp- Gah. I hate typos >.< Could you point them out to me so I can fix them?

And thank you so much for your comment! I'm glad I made you happy :]] As far as characters go, I'll be adding at least two more within the next few chapters. That's not to say they'll necessarily be famous, though :3

Again, thank you all for your comments! It makes me very happy to hear you guys like it so much :3 Although, I hate to say it, but updates will be coming a bit slower starting Monday -- softball season is starting, which will take up a bit of time. I'll still try to update every night, though!

Oh, and I added a playlist as well :]]

Brilliant!
I know you don't like this chapter, but I do =D
So be reassured =]

With the above comment - sure, it could be fast. But this is true love, right? XD
Or at least, I hope so.

i keep tabs on all the stories i read!

this is getting really good...their relationship is a little...quick, maybe? but then again ive never driven from jersey to NY with a stranger and then rocked out and watched a movie with them...it might be normal to grow that close! (:

NE-who... <33

All right, so I snuck online tonight and your story is the first I see when I click on the stories link. Boy, was I not disappointed. :D

I have to say, I really like the premise of it, how there's basically only Frank and Gerard in this story (though that's only so far - I'm almost positive you'll include some other characters soon).

I think your writing style is great, but I found a few mistakes - one was an obvious typo and the other was simply because you forgot a word - though neither of them are something you should worry about.

I'm greatly anticipating more (soon, hopefully?) and I'll definitely be subscribing.

<3 C

i read ISOTSNATWT too soo im definatly gonna begg her if it means updates on both the storys XP

they are flirting sooo bad! expecially Gerard!

....Four chapters?!?!?! Nice, dude, awesome. :]
And he has a thing for pixies? Because Frank totally is one. -envisions Frank with faerie wings- yup, he could totally pull it off.
More soon? Well, I already [hope] that there's gonna be more soon. But asking politely one extra time isn't gonna hurt anything, is it?

I'd like to take a moment to redirect everyon towards KranK's stories :]
I'd also like to let everyone know that she rarely updates, and makes me very sad.
I strongly suggest that you all spam her comment wall and beg her to add another chapter to all three of her current series.

Miss KranK, if you update ISOTSNAATWT tonight, I will post two more segments before ten o'clock :]]
Every update you do on top of that will result in yet another update!
So you're looking at four possible chapters tonight :3

aah EDWARD SCISSORHANDS!!!
my idol...<33 haha
it makes me cry, too... they just manipulate and use him so bad... *sigh*

I can't remember if i've told you or not, but i'm rather enjoying this story. It's nice to find a story that writen well too. && Edward Scissorhands at the drive in would be amazing. :]

lol, frankies gonna WAIL! XD

and love that song, i was listening to it about 5 mins ago actually =)

awesome update!

susie x

Really, really cool story =]

Another story that'll make your heart stop!
LoVE

(Amazing taste in music btw)

Omg.
Amazingness.
I really like this.
It's really good.
I'm totally subscribing.
Anyway, please update soon!
: D

Well... It wasn't the fun stuff I was thinking of... but it was still fun stuff. It was cute.
And Gerard is totally hitting on Frank. Obviously. He took him to a drive-in! It's like, set in stone now!
lol If no one else understands that, it's okay, I'm still at a loss of the knowlegde of exactly what I'm talking about.
But it's still amazing. And the update was speedy, which was double-y awesome. And there's MORE fun stuff to come?? Triple-y awesome. Don't overdose on awesomeness, man.
yeah... I'm just gonna shut up now.
Oh, and misterlecoure I really, really, reallly, reallllly like your ava :]

New reader, and I like it muchly.
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*subscribelfjdfjdlfkjdfljdfljdfkljk...s*
O.o
I kinda fucked up that word a bit.....
XD

Oh, well.

Anywhore, love it so far, dear.

omg i love Edward Scissorhands i always get teary eyed near the end =]

is there going to be any romantic kisses while whatching the movie?

@ KranK;; HA! I'm not sure if I'll actually incorporate any smut ;]] But I may imply it. Maybe I won't, though. You'll just have to wait and see.

@ Secret Destroyers;; Yeah, this was shorter than I'd have liked :]] The next few will be long, no doubt! Or at least, longer.

@ YuMmYxXfErArD;;I read your joint story; it's cute :3 And thank you for your comment!

@ paintthesilence;; All those 'x's for me? Aww, you shouldn't have :3

@PixieSCREAM;;Aww, haha :]] Short isn't bad -- but why is it all short people are compare to mythical creatures? My friend, Morgan, calls me leprochaun since he's two inches taller. It's insane :]] The fun stuff may or may not be coming in four chapters. This is the introduction to the fun stuff, I suppose :]]

Thank you all for your comments, and I'm glad you enjoyed the dedications!

Haha yesssh. I am a very good citizen -tips hat-
And haha Frank's a pixie. But he kinda could be cuz people call me that cuz I'm short. >.<
And how's that for dedication!?! That's fuckin cool! :]
But anywayyyy Celebrating? Is this the fun stuff!?!?!?! -bounces- fuuuun stuuuuff...
Update sooooooon!!!!!!

amazing update! *pats self on shoulder for getting right answer* MORE SOON!?! xx times a million