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  • Spoileddxbrat

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    Love it :) please update ^__^
    May 29th, 2012 at 03:10am
  • FuckNo

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    It was definitely interesting, although I'm still debating about whether showing the interaction between Lyn and Brian was best accomplished watching it from the outside. It definitely achieves something different than if the audience got to see what Lyn was thinking and feeling, but yeah.

    Also, careful with commas since you have a lot of them. And be careful about two vs to, although I really only saw it once when Johnny and Lyn were coming back with drinks.
    May 4th, 2012 at 11:16pm
  • FuckNo

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    Interesting. Wondering if the creepy ex is just there by coincidence or if he was brought in by someone else just to freak them out. Or if he's even around and if someone else is just using those things to get under her skin.
    February 26th, 2012 at 02:34am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    I loved the update honey.
    February 25th, 2012 at 11:30pm
  • FuckNo

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    Yay for Lynny covering her! Also, d'awwww babies!

    Everyone's going to be stoked when they find out.
    February 7th, 2012 at 04:18am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Poor Lynny. I feel sorry that they grilled her like that!
    I love Michelle, she's awesome!!! Update soon babez!
    February 6th, 2012 at 10:39pm
  • Synyster Gates;

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    0_0....
    LOVED IT!!!!
    January 14th, 2012 at 10:19pm
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    0_0....
    LOVED IT!!!!
    January 14th, 2012 at 10:19pm
  • FuckNo

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    I feel like I've read this update before. o_o
    January 14th, 2012 at 10:02pm
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Great update babe!
    January 14th, 2012 at 03:56pm
  • FuckNo

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    YAY MICHELLE! :)

    I adore Michelle. ^.^
    January 13th, 2012 at 11:10pm
  • Synyster Gates;

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    I love the update!
    December 30th, 2011 at 11:13pm
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    Much better and yay for being preggo! :)

    I loved this chapter. lol Johnny's reaction was cute.
    December 30th, 2011 at 10:14pm
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    I like the story except for one detail. Bailey. She's too young and I didn't realize this story was set in 2006, but that's beside the point. They're in California. The age of consent is 18. If Jimmy has sex with Bailey, he can go to prison and be put on the sex offender list for statutory rape. Seriously, up her to at least eighteen, although even then it's still kind of creepy, although then it's at least not illegal.
    December 24th, 2011 at 12:17am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    *wow face*
    Holy freaking shit!
    I loved this fucking-awesome-insane-awesome- update!

    More soon? Pwease!
    December 17th, 2011 at 11:31pm
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Oh fucking holy shit! HELL YEAH!
    Candy got her ass beat up by Val. Go Val.
    Okay, so I must say.
    That Brian is a fucking idiot. Trailing after her like a lost puppy. He really needs to wake up badly!
    And I sense someone is preggo ;)!

    Love yah too hunni!
    December 9th, 2011 at 10:06pm
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Can I just say, that Candy needs her ass stomped into the fucking ground?
    And seriously, where are the comments? I mean this is a FUCKING amazing story!
    I loved the update, and I seriously can't wait for the next.
    December 9th, 2011 at 03:49am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Oh my god! Where is the comments on this my love?! This is so amazing, and I so love it!!!
    I so need more please :)!
    xoxo!
    December 6th, 2011 at 11:15pm