May 10th, 2011 at 02:29am
Btw, you should bring the storm in again. Use it to set the mood. That's still missing from this. It's a major flaw seeing as this is called Thunderstorm.
Glad you made that into one word, as well. I just noticed that. :DDDD
Overall though, this was very heartwarming.
I liked it a lot, and do think you should continue. (;;