The Day I Went Crazy - Comments

  • annoes

    annoes (100)

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    Don't forget to fix the italics in the first chapter!

    I like the change to "Nestor." It suits him!

    I can't wait so see where this goes!
    May 10th, 2011 at 03:05am
  • Teddi Manni

    Teddi Manni (100)

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    I like this so far :)

    More detail and emotions, yes?

    A better layout would suit this story justice, shall I help? :)
    May 9th, 2011 at 09:55pm