The Kind of Human Wreckage That You Love - Comments

Okay, so I'm not familiar with this fandom at all, but it does sound super interesting! I absolutely love the layout; it's creepy and bloody and weird, but it's definitely great. I'm pretty surprised to see that there's an addiction to bloodshed. I've never heard of that before o.O How freakin' boss, though xD Anyways, this was freakin'...weird and cool at the same time, especially the part with the wraith. I've often heard of wraiths in fairy fiction, but never in this kind of fiction. This odd addiction to bloodshed added this touch to the story that just made it...gah, I dunno, I'm rambling, but this is so great! I love how he seems proud of himself for making all of these people bleed and die. Yikes. I think this sentences sums up my love for this: He loves the sensation of dragging a blade across the victim’s skin. It is smooth and often makes a clean cut. The blood flows in a straight line like a river. skfjskgjasdklj this guy's a psycho. o.O But then again, I do love this. Bloodshed + horror = my type of story. Noooo, I'm not crazy at all. I just read my Hannibal novels alot >.> Anyways, I'm rambling again; all in all, THIS WAS BLOODY (haha, no pun intended!) AMAZING! I really enjoyed this (: Lovely job! <3

I liked the focus on the character, I felt it really did bring the story to life. It was an interesting way of writing. I thought the flow was developed well, just a few grammar mistakes bringing it down. I liked the plot of this piece. Well done!

I'm not familiar with this fandom, but after reading this, I think I'd like to be. The song was not only appropriate, but assimilated well; it's so rare to see a good song fic, and I praise you for it. I did notice a few dropped or misplaced commas here and there; not big deal, and no typos or serious grammatical errors to be had. Very well done, dear.

This was definitely a very intriguing read!

I have to say that the aspect of this that I enjoyed the most was the character!fic feel to it. I'm a huge sucker for character analysis and stories that really get into the character's head and explore why they are the way that they are, and I thought this was a perfect example of that type of fiction.

I loved the way that you seamlessly interwove aspects from Acastus's childhood into the present torture scene that was taking place, and how you used the verses as a way of dividing and organizing the piece more efficiently. I thought you did an amazing job of tying in the prompt, and I wish you luck with the contest =)