Speed Up Your Breathing - Comments

Awwh, that's cute as!!
Perfect way to end it; very nicely done.

YES I'd be up for a sequel!! :D

YAYY UPDATE!
aww, but she's all evil making poor billiam traipse all round america after her =/
they need to get back together!! xD

susie x

=DDD
she's going all evil xD

holiday!

susie x

Yay! I am glad there's more. I needed that.

dooode, you're back!!!!
and it's superrad!
=DDDDD
congrats, you made my day! =]

susie x

i like your story, and now im going to go subscribe before i forget =]

I love this story! Gawd it was so like "must read next chapter!"

Love it! Keep those update coming pwease!

vee

woot, loved the new chapter!

wooo, update!
and she's in LA! without williams knowledge... XD
awesome chapter, as always =)

susie x

Wow!
Great update.
It was really cute hoe he caught her ahnd before she slapped him.
They should have kissed!
but she's moving to LA?
Things just got a lot more interesting....

Update soon?

=D you updated!
and it was very very very cute!
they snuggled! yay!

susie x

I just read the whole story just then and I thought it was amazing!
Your a great writer.

Just watch when you write things like
"Then said: "Uh...hmmm...okay"

There really shouldn't be a : after said.
just ignore me if you want.
I'm a bit weird.

wows, he was a bastard and a half!
glad she's rid of him!
i hope his child turns out really ugly... but f it shares genes wth william beckett that's incredibly unlikely XD

make me happy, update again soon!

susie x

=D

what's the secret?!
*stamps foot* I wanna know! XD

susie x

oooh, it's so damn cute!
and funny XD

more soon?

susie x

someone lovez her!

*cough* WILLIAM! *cough*

another chapter soon?...

susie x

4 30 am makes your eyes tired, i though it said "read/MASSAGE/comment"

well, okay *gives massage*

and as for the story, it's super awesome!
and strangely addictive...

i can't wait for the next update!
susie x

This story sounds reaaalllly good! Update?

i love the story so far! =) update soon!