Jeesh, her teacher's kind of jerk, isn't he? I thought Crystal was 16? And Emerald was 15? I don't know, I could have misread. I personally prefer either Mantis or Viper in Kung Fu Panda, but that's just me. :P ________
Overall I found it really interesting, Girl superheroes are always a good thing! I wish you have touched a little bit more on the fact that she was a superhero, though. Or does she not know/doesn't haven't her powers yet? There were a very limited amount of spelling mistakes, but nothing very noticeable, I barely noticed it myself.
Long, think, wavy brown hair, .... Long, thick, wavy brown hair, ....
Obviously just a mistake that you didn't catch. We can't catch them all all the time!
I thought Crystal was 16? And Emerald was 15? I don't know, I could have misread.
I personally prefer either Mantis or Viper in Kung Fu Panda, but that's just me. :P
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Overall I found it really interesting, Girl superheroes are always a good thing! I wish you have touched a little bit more on the fact that she was a superhero, though. Or does she not know/doesn't haven't her powers yet? There were a very limited amount of spelling mistakes, but nothing very noticeable, I barely noticed it myself.
Long, think, wavy brown hair, ....
Long, thick, wavy brown hair, ....
Obviously just a mistake that you didn't catch. We can't catch them all all the time!