November Rain - Comments

This made me sad-ish. But there was one part that made me laugh. Where he found Michelle cheating and he said that's he's paid for her boobs. That was funny. And their unborn baby, that made my heart break. And Jimmy - oh, that was sad too. Good story though. I liked the way it was written and the song lyrics that you added in their as well.

I really like this so far. It's pretty awesome! The descriptions are not too detailed, but not too vague, either. Perfect. His wife is such a whore :P Aha. I loved the plot and everything, and the layout is simple but fitting. The title is also very fitting, as well as intriguing(: The summary...well, you didn't really include a "summary" of the story, just the disclaimer and the rating and the song. So, I don't have much to say about that. Good job, I like your oneshots(: