Some Called Angels - Comments

UGH OH MY GOD WHY WAS I SO WRONG!?

I reallllllyyy like Piotr, I want him and Malak to be besties.or lovers.

Now THAT chapter had the emotion I was looking for in the first one. And you know what you left me hanging and just craving to know what her brother, dad, and JOHN [who is this JOHN!?] did to her that hurt but she doesn't blame them for? All because of her power?

GAH.

I can't take this. I have to subscribe. :3

As always, excellent flow, spelling, grammar and the like...

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WAIT WAIT WAIT!

Hold on.

...okay um deep breath.

I love those names sooooo much. Okay, now that that's out of the way. xD

I love how you described Malak's feelings. How she went from being sad, lonely, and faintly depressed to OMG YAY A VISITOOOOR. <3 It was so cute. On the other side of things, I felt you could have put just a teeeeeensy bit more emotion into it. More description. But hell, that's just me. I'm like that all over. xD

I like the big guy already. I feel like those two are going to become super-awesome friends. :3

The layout is lovely, and I especially love the name of the story and the chapter names. <3

I'm off to read chapter twoo! <3

That's just cruel, love. You can't expect me to wait patiently after a fantastic, mysterious update like that! You must update. Today. Right now! What can she do that no one else can? I NEED TO KNOW!!! <3

UPDATE!

I've never been one much for the X-men series. I don't know why. Hmm... =\

I love the layout, it's simple and, like before, adds the mood to the story. I could never create a banner like that. =\ Yours is just so beautiful, love!

The names are so... out there. It just adds to the majestic feeling of your story. I'm anxious to see where you are going with this story of yours.

I really like this story, surprisingly. I had no idea it was a fanfic until I read your A/N. You had me entranced at the words and strong descriptions. You have a beautiful talent for words, dearie! Update soon, mmkay? <3

Hm. I quite like this, really. I'm not usually one for sci-fi's and fantasies but this is pretty good. However, I do suggest re-reading because I found some mistakes. Other than that, it's really good.