OH MY GOD. WHY JOHN, WHY? Why can't he just stop the wedding, seriously. THEY LOVE EACH OTHER AND HE'S BEING A DOUCHE AND WON'T STOP THE WEDDING. But I really love this story, by the way.
What A Bitch! Wait no Slut...whore...hobag...Slut Bucket... How could John do that shit to her? I hope he gets hit. One of the guys needs to punch him, right before the wedding... you know to "slap some sense into him" and because he totally deserves it for being kissing back and then being a dick. Askvhiheorjjhj, not cool bro. anywhore, I cant wait to find out what happens at the weddinggg. Write more por favor(:
Omg! I did not see that coming. I got so excited when they kissed I was like "finally they are gonna get together!" Then he said that. I cannot wait to see what happens next This is an amazing story. Your a great writer!
I am in SHOCK at what just happened. Although I was hoping that John would take it well, you played this scene out perfectly. I loved the drama, and while it is good for a few chapters, I am still definitely rooting for Dorinda and John's HEA moment.
You know what? Fuck him, no fuck him in the damn butt! He could have said something in high school. That little hypocritical shit. You know what? Dorinda just needs to go off and some type of amazing carreer like a model or actress or a singer sone fucking amazing ass job where he has to see her face everywhere and deal with the fucking pain. have hot boyfriends who has a sexy accent. and when her and her sexy beau get married make him the fucking best man and see how he likes it! To top it all off he kissed back! He. fucking. kissed. Back. I hope his marriage sucks. He's such a freaking limp dick!
Yes I realize this is completely fictional, but this made feel bad for dorinda...
John's so stupid ! That's like, really crazy payback on his part ! I thought that was sooo sweet with Dia's confession (not counting the bathroom bang thing, but the I Love You one) and then he just goes and throws it back in her face. Niiiiice, John, you idiot ! And it's not like Dia knew he felt that way about her. Frickin' idiot ! Please right more ! I want to know what happens !
gaahhh, i have tears in my eyes D;
what a douche,
update soooon, please?!