This is different from the other stories I've read. I'm going to be honest, the limage is distracting and more than a little bit. If you're going to have a backround design like that then you should have a solide colored box where the summary is. And a different color for the text because white can hurt the readers eyes. I'm going to have to use the default layout if the chapters look like the summary. It will be easier than having to highlight everything.
Chapter One
I thought this chapter was rather heartwarming. This story sounds prett interesting actually. I wasn't sure if it would. Since it isn't what I normally read I thought I was just going to leave a nice comment and be done. I really like it and i like the names you ise as well. Did you make them up or are they actual names? Neat storyline too and it doesn't sound like it will be one of those cliche fantasy based save the kingdom stories either. The photo's you used for MAthias and Noita are great. They're pretty close to what I was picturing in my head. I'm sorry the comment was a little short. I usually leave longer ones when there is more than one chapter because I like to theorize what will happen next. I am curious as to who these guests are though and what impact they will have on the village.
Chapter One
I thought this chapter was rather heartwarming. This story sounds prett interesting actually. I wasn't sure if it would. Since it isn't what I normally read I thought I was just going to leave a nice comment and be done. I really like it and i like the names you ise as well. Did you make them up or are they actual names? Neat storyline too and it doesn't sound like it will be one of those cliche fantasy based save the kingdom stories either. The photo's you used for MAthias and Noita are great. They're pretty close to what I was picturing in my head. I'm sorry the comment was a little short. I usually leave longer ones when there is more than one chapter because I like to theorize what will happen next. I am curious as to who these guests are though and what impact they will have on the village.