Demise. - Comments

Great update, although a few things.
There were only a couple of tiny mistakes made, such as when John patted his shoulder you put 'my' instead of 'his'. And a few other things. But no huge deal.
Anyways, great update:)

I have honestly never see the name Prosper in a story before. The name is really cool and unique; I like finding characters with unique names. In the prologue, I like how you described Prosper and then added how Norah was one of the only people who didn't really like him like everyone did.

The thing that surprised me in the first chapter was the fact that Prosper hated all of the people around him. This is a really great story so far and I can't wait to see what happens next.

update soon? i really like it :{D

Not gonna lie, this seems like a really cool story.
I'm wicked intrigued by his personality although he reminds me of some of the jerks at my school, but then again thats the point isn't it? I can't wait to really read on and get under his skin to see what he's really like though.
I can't wait to read more about his whole name thing. Haha. Sounds like something I'd name my kid.
Wicked excited for Norah to come in and shake up everything he knows. :)
Definately subscribing and waiting impatiently for the next update!-
Rae