This is definitely interesting and I really like that you made it into one of those odd movie scenarios all dealing with money. It would've been interesting to hear why she owed the money or how she planned to get it. What exactly happened to her when her time ran out and Carl didn't show up. Very interesting. I also love the repetition of nine though I don't quite see the significance. You have 270 as the title, so possibly nine times thirty? Do mention it thirty times? Would like to know a bit more about that. Anyway, lovely piece.
December 29th, 2011 at 11:40pm