Cipher Dreams - Comments

This was really nice. I loved how short it was. I lliked how it had a message.

Love the layout<3

In all honesty, when I first saw how many words there were I did not expect anything good from this. I didn't think that any meaning could be packed into about five lines. But holy sh*t you did good. It's mindblowing the impact those few words can have, and I know that that's the point of a drabble but you do it exceptionally well. And I know it's annoying to hear this when you're fourteen, but this is especially amazing for how young you are. Keep up the great work<3

Oh gosh have I felt like this many times.

You were able to capture that feeling, that doesn't even have a name; it's desperation, want, need, pain, longing, all into one. I know exactly what those words mean. More comforting than breathing. Just four words, and you managed to capture that feeling so eloquently. Short yet powerful.

I'm gonna go ahead and repeat what I told you before: It is amazing how you can actually portray such feeling of wanting to simply give up on everything, of utter exhaustion, in such a small piece.