October 13th, 2015 at 11:24pm
I am fucking laughing.
First of all, deary, I will explain this. I am laughing because okay, so, the other day, I got the notification for the Entice update. I'm headed over there after I finish writing this, but I just want to let you know I was dying when I saw you updated. Why?
Because I was in the middle of reading this. XD Like, it's like you were fucking psychic or something. I totally dig it. Your stories have me hooked.
OMG though, girl, this story has put me through hell. In a good way, though, I promise.
First of all, I made the mistake of starting it on a Sunday. I should've started it on a Friday, it would've worked a lot better due to me dealing with college right now, but nope, I decided to find it and start it on a Sunday. And once I started... goddamn it, I couldn't get it out of my head.
This has been torture because I have been dealing with college all week. And trying to make time to read this, my God, was it hell. Not to mention when I wasn't reading it it was bothering me because I WASN'T. Oh my God this was actually pretty fucking amazing, I mean, I liked this a hell of a lot more than your cowrite, that's for sure. I mean, to get the critiquing out of the way, some of the facts didn't match up at different parts but I think that was to be expected since this is one of your older stories. And to be honest I didn't really give a fuck since the rest of it is just amazing. This is seriously so good for it being older.
I was in classes, thinking about this story; couldn't get it out of my head and was anticipating reading more. The fact that I got this done in less than a week while dealing with college is seriously astounding. I don't know what the fuck is wrong with me for not being able to put it down, and OMG, I am so sorry for all of this cursing, but I'm just being honest here. Not to mention, I'm currently sleep deprived (again, because of this story; either because I stayed up later reading it or because of having to stay up because of pushed off assignments that happened because I couldn't stop reading), so that may be the other reasoning for my current state of bluntness. Oh my.
Ughhhh, this was so cute. Like, I'm not a fan of cheaters but I just like, couldn't not accept this plotline. And there was a fair reasoning behind it too; it wasn't like Kayla's sister didn't somewhat deserve a bit revenge.
So I am like, so happy that I got to read this and I hope you get a laugh out of this comment. I'm off to read entice... who knows, maybe this happiness will give me the courage to comment on that too. At the very least, message a review. Maybe... I'm still thinking about it.
But yes, that explains why I have not checked that update yet. While I have been busy I was more so busy trying to read this story and keeping up with everything, school wise. I wanted to finish it because damn... DID I MENTION HOW AMAZING IT IS? XD
But now that I have I'm good I think. Aha. You are awesome. I'm so sad I did not find your stories sooner than I did... I could've given you a ton more reviews. :(
But perhaps these long comments will make up for it. ;)
AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING. Great job deary. :D
A year later, too. Holy shit. I was just randomly looking through my recs though, and stumbled across this again, and just remembered how amazing it was and had to reread it.
It is seriously an amazing story. And I just miss reading your writing. lol.
I feel like you're the writer of a lot of my favorite ATL stories I've read.
And I know this won't have a sequel to it or anything but I just had to leave another comment letting you know I came back to reread it again. It's seriously that good. I really applaud your writing.