April 22nd, 2012 at 11:43pm
I really wouldn't mind reading any more of this. Really. It goes on the growing list of original vampire stories that aren't so cliche, they've lost themselves in the chaos of mibba.
I like it, and I really hope you write a lot more, and soon. I apologise if I can't be more constructive though. My mind's not in it's right place at the moment. But good work and I envy your writing skills (=
I like this vampire a lot (though, I can't remember his name. Either I skipped on it or you just didn't put it in for various purposes), even though he killed Alys. He still somewhat has a soul and he somewhat feels remorse for what he did. I really hope that you'd continue on writing this, because I'm extremely curious to find out what made him do what he did. Maybe add some bits about his past life here and there? o:
I greatly enjoyed reading this and I really hope you take our advice in making this a chaptered story ;D Great job! <3