Pot & Kettle - Comments

We both know it's not your best work, but it was just to have something into the contest ;D

Besides stating the obvious you know I loved the humor! So funny!

Before I start, I would like to just tell you that this will be short and quick due to the fact that I must judge all the other entries. I'll be able to give you a full review on your next entries.

8 out of 10 points for Originality.
The cheater-archetype was expected, but I enjoyed the humor too. It was a nice change for a the few angst-anger filled.

5 out of 5 points for Quality

12 out of 15 points for Prompt
I couldn't really see how you incorporated the prompt in the story. I can see how they would think of the other as the, er... 'asshole', was it? But. I don't know. You didn't have to directly state the phrase, but I think it would have helped here.

10 out of 10 points for Capturing Attention

10 out of 10 points for Spelling, Vocab, etc.

Total Points: 45 + 2 points for word count points = 47 points

Judging for “So You Think You Can Write?”:

8/10 for Originality
I expected most people to have a cheater-type story with this prompt, which is what you had. But I found the humor in it funny, which is why I didn’t take off more points.

5/5 for Quality
Good job…good quality.

15/15 for Following Prompt
Again, the whole cheater-story definitely follows the prompt.

10/10 for Capturing My Attention
The title caught my attention, because I wasn’t sure what to expect, so good title. :)

10/10 for Spelling/Grammar/Vocab
I caught no mistakes. :)

Total Points: 48 points from Moonlit.Memories for Round One
(Note: I’m not adding bonuses for word count/comments/etc. because I’m not sure what aquarius plans on doing with that…just so you know.)

You have a bit of repetition, it mostly flows well but there were a few places where it seemed a little much,
but yeah anyways, let me abandon my inner critic
because I like this. I like the character of it.
Anyways..