This One's for You - Comments

Oh, this was so not crap! I'll agree, the layout wasn't the greatest, but the story was far from crap.
It was so damn cute, I thought my face was going to fall off from how much I was smiling. I think that officially is going to be a new thing on my 'brownie points' list: if it makes me smile so much my face hurts.
So first off, I love how you took the personalities that were kind of evident in the picture and put them into the boys in the story. I could practically see the two of them sitting there in the booth being adorable together just like they were in the picture.
I also love just how submissive you made them out to be. I mean, in reality two submissive boys could be outgoing and whatnot and still be submissive. But I have a soft spot for these kinds of boys, where they're almost too shy for their own good. Those are the kinds of submissive boys that just burrow in and hunker down in that lovey, soft spot of my heart.
The way you wrote this was really great too. It actually seemed like I was watching a real couple interact with each other.
The thing with the picture being his new wallpaper kind of took hold of that effect and really brought it out. That's such a normal thing with couples now, and it was just too cute here because it fit so well.
Really, overall I fell in love with these two. I look forward to that in stories, and this one was just awesome.

I thought it was adorable!!!!!!!
Def not crap:)

For a second i was thinking 'What? Frank Iero and Gustav Wood?! xD But you cleared that one up pretty fast haha
It'd be weird to read that. I'm picturing it now xD
HAVE YOU SEEN GUS' NEW HAIR?! sorry...but have you?>
Dustin seems like a pretty cool guy :) I know he wasn't the main guy but he set them and that's awesome
Oh oh oh and they are sooo adorable :3
And that was not crap! :) Loved it!

well I thought it was anything BUT crap!
They were both so frickin' adorable =]
kinda glad it wasn't Frank Iero and Gustav Wood. That WOULD be weird.
This Gustav and this Frank were perfect.
Loved it!