August 19th, 2011 at 04:06pm
Wow. o: This was good. This was so good, man. Your descriptions were flawless and precise, to the point, not too complex again, but enough to understand, to picture, and to feel. I don't know much about that case, either, but it sounds like you did fine. It's not as if you were trying to describe what it was all about. You just described what she was feeling, what she was thinking, and the decision that she made. You described it without actually saying it bluntly, which I thought was great, because it let you guessing, and you know we'll all have the feeling we guessed right. She's going to get help now. c: That was great. Awesome job.
-Luna
Wow. That was really disturbingly but honestly written. I don't think I've ever read bulimia being shown so disgustingly and descriptively. I liked that nothing was glossed over, but it wasn't just said outright. You're a wonderful writer.