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  • Levitate.

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    I finished it! Hahas. I really did like it. There was a lot of things tht happened, and it showed tht they were meant to be together. You did a great job of writing it! There are a few mistakes but it's easy to read over them and I could actually make it thru the whole story without a problem because you wrote this story a lot better than most of the stories I've read. Anyway, I'm going to start on the sequel now. I can't wait to start it!
    July 12th, 2015 at 09:54am
  • Reverse-This-Curse

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    I just finished this story in two days. I figured I needed to comment on this because you deserve it. I am in love with this story and I'm excited to see where the sequel goes (which I'm about to start on now). I loved that this story wasn't an overload of dramatic things happening all the time which is highly common in any fan fiction today. Most of the time Att's father would have been this nutz-o person like trying to murder everyone and atticus would have all the problems. And it gets almost hard to read. But I loved this because you kept it simple and should what a relationship is actually like. Even if it did move incredibly fast. I don't know what all happened with the Missuri stuff but I hope it's all figured out. I did read your two blog posts though. I hope you still talk to your friends. Ugh I'm just so excited to start your story!
    June 2nd, 2014 at 07:16pm
  • fridabida

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    Hello "Maddie Bleu" . This is Frida Gurewitz. Really , you can look at my profile. I am seriously Frida Gurewitz. I know you're taking creative liberties with your ideas and I appreciate that. I'm a writer. Seriously. Look it up. I'm not asking you to delete the story. But I am asking that you please look at the way you are writing. I am not famous. My brother and my baby sister is not famous. Just because my father is famous does not mean you have the right to write about me. I know you're going to make some statement about haters . But really. I just want you to know that you're crossing a line of privacy.
    August 10th, 2013 at 09:05am
  • JennaBella

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    loved this story it was really a great read!!
    February 27th, 2013 at 11:06pm
  • xorachsauce

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    Oh, and the ending? awww <3
    July 3rd, 2012 at 08:49pm
  • xorachsauce

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    Oh, and the ending? awww <3
    July 3rd, 2012 at 08:49pm
  • xorachsauce

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    ahh! Adorable overload. So so so much love. You write fantastically and the emotion you put into everything is incredible. :D I absolutely love this.
    July 3rd, 2012 at 08:49pm
  • Arcapello

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    The ending was amazing! I think it was the best chapter so far. I'm sad it's over, but the ending was definitely perfect.
    July 2nd, 2012 at 09:51pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    The ending was so sweet and I hate to see it go <3!! My first Ronnie story that I have ever read on here!! I really loved this :)!! I do love your writing and hope to see more Ronnie in the future :)!! That was a great ride :)!!
    July 2nd, 2012 at 05:55am
  • boriquachicka

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    Awwww just.... amazing. I loved the whole "I'm gonna marry you someday" speech. That was just priceless and made me 'aww' out loud. Amazing and now I'm off to go read something else of yours :)
    July 2nd, 2012 at 03:07am
  • boriquachicka

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    Hey, just read about your dog... I know how that feels, my first dog was put to sleep when I was in second grade and it was really hard (I'd had her since I was a toddler). My other dog had cancer and didn't make it through surgery a few years ago... It's really hard but your pets are ready to play catch with you, lay in your lap... etc wherever we go when we die. <3
    July 2nd, 2012 at 02:17am
  • boriquachicka

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    Thanks for the background information on Michael Cook... I had been wondering about the legit details, it seems like everyone has a side. But I really appreciated that :)
    July 2nd, 2012 at 02:03am
  • boriquachicka

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    Aww little Arch and Ronnie and Att cuddlefest. So cute <3
    July 2nd, 2012 at 01:19am
  • boriquachicka

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    So based on the other comments, I see you finished this. YAY... now I can read without worrying about having to wait ;) Okay.. I'm on Chapter 43 and I'm just loving the story. <3
    July 2nd, 2012 at 12:11am
  • alyssanparker

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    The end was s o beautiful. I've never read a story ended so right.:) It was amazing. I'm gonna miss this. Looking forward to the next one. :D
    July 1st, 2012 at 11:26pm
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    Loved this. what a truly beautiful story. Job well done! :)
    July 1st, 2012 at 07:52pm
  • Adventure Time.

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    D'awww this was so fucking amazing! I'm going to reread this when I get a chance! You just ended it so perfectly and-AHHHHH!!

    I'm going to miss this story so fucking much, but you did amazingly with it. Thank you SO much for taking the time to write this (and ending it on a good number haha).

    Always keep writing, and if you do ever make an original fic and get a chance to post it, I'll definitely read it. XOXO
    July 1st, 2012 at 05:48pm
  • Diellza

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    This story was truly amazing! You did an awesome job writing it! I'm sad to see that this was the end but it was a beautiful ending! I loved this story so much! I'm gonna look forward into reading your other stories! <3
    July 1st, 2012 at 05:27pm
  • Forevergoth

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    I love this story and the ending was great!!! I'm sad it's over. D: but you did an amazing job! XD
    July 1st, 2012 at 05:10pm
  • PoIsOnIvY0212

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    I love this story! I really enjoyed it, well written and a fabulous read. :) I look forward to reading your other stories! :) xoxox
    July 1st, 2012 at 03:22pm