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  • Eimie

    Eimie (100)

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    I thought this was an amazing oneshot.

    I liked how you mainly started with describing the room like the walls and couch.

    And you really showed us the main character's emotions, everything was really wrapped up nicely from showing who she was on about and how she felt etc.

    In certain ways you could continue this but in other ways you should leave it like this.

    Great job!
    August 19th, 2011 at 02:48pm
  • stopkellinme

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    Wow, I really liked this! The imagery was great, the diction was great, and it was just a great story overall. You're a great writer! :)
    June 13th, 2011 at 05:58pm
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