10/10 for Originality Good job; I wasn’t expecting a death story with the pictures that you were given. :)
5/5 for Quality A comment isn’t really needed, now is there? :)
15/15 for Ability to Incorporate Prompt You used two pictures, the “falling up” one and the heart one. I like how you used the “falling up” picture as a sort-of death picture.
8/10 for Capturing My Attention It didn’t really capture my attention…I’m not sure how to explain it.
10/10 for Vocab/Spelling/Grammar There were a couple of mistakes, but not enough to dock points or take away from the story.
Total Points: 48 (+2 for using three picture titles) = 50 points from Moonlit.Memories for Round Two
10/10 for Originality
Good job; I wasn’t expecting a death story with the pictures that you were given. :)
5/5 for Quality
A comment isn’t really needed, now is there? :)
15/15 for Ability to Incorporate Prompt
You used two pictures, the “falling up” one and the heart one. I like how you used the “falling up” picture as a sort-of death picture.
8/10 for Capturing My Attention
It didn’t really capture my attention…I’m not sure how to explain it.
10/10 for Vocab/Spelling/Grammar
There were a couple of mistakes, but not enough to dock points or take away from the story.
Total Points: 48 (+2 for using three picture titles) = 50 points from Moonlit.Memories for Round Two