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  • oxford comma

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    I'M SCREAMING OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO PERFECT

    I'M ALSO CRYING BECAUSE THIS IS SO SAD

    YOU CAPTURED THE MOMENT PERFECTLY AND SEAMLESSLY WORKED IN VIOLET AND THIS IS JUST PERFECT ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE
    October 6th, 2013 at 06:12pm
  • iron and wine.

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    Can someone say tearjerker much?? Love the plot, love the layout, love the story! Wonderfully written. I have no clue why, because happy endings are awesome, but sad endings always pull me in. They're just so interesting to me, because it leaves me wondering. What happened to Harry after Violet died? How did he cope? Sad endings are like beautifully written cliffhangers, and you wrote this amazingly :)
    December 28th, 2011 at 01:17am
  • thedarksnowqueen

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    Poor Violet... Poor Harry... This is just sad. A very sad short story. I loved it.
    July 5th, 2011 at 08:30pm
  • lalala247

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    oh my gosh!
    that was soooo great!! :D XD
    it was soooo sad. :( it made me tear up.
    It was writen beautifully. :)
    Wow, that was a plot twist!
    Brilliant job. I loved it. :)
    July 1st, 2011 at 02:54am
  • topless

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    I...I just...there are no words. That was beautiful. That was heartbreaking. Like, I'm almost in tears. If you don't win that contest...well, then...I don't even know. Holy crap, I'm crying now. You're magnificent and your writing is superb.

    Now I'm off to go curl up in a corner and drown myself in tears. <3
    June 30th, 2011 at 11:39pm