April 20th, 2017 at 07:38am
I'm surprised there are no comments on this one. I love how detailed you wrote everything. It would be awesome if James really did have a tattoo. I think I would be way more attracted to him :D
I love this. Amazing job hon!
I like that you took this concept and made it into a bit of a love story. I've never really understood why people get names tattooed on them, but I liked that you explained his reasoning and the emotions behind why he did it and that he didn't regret it at all. It would have been super sketchy if he immediately regretted what he did.
I liked how you added in the back story of the characters just through James' thoughts and his chat with the tattoo artist. It gave me all the information I needed to understand what was going on in the story, but kept a really nice flow and pace to the story, so I didn't feel like everything was choppy or broken up in weird places.
I am wondering what Autum would say when she saw the tattoo, since it was mentioned that her and James might not be in the best of places in their relationship. That being said, I think you ended the story in a great place. It made me really curious about what would happen after, but I also felt like the story was completed and I wasn't missing anything, if that makes sense.
Overall, great job and thanks for entering!