Can Anybody Hear Me - Comments

  • My eyes watered when you wrote about Faith and Matt. My stepbrother was shot and killed at 14 I know the feeling the dread the pain everything ugh ... I feel horrible for Shania having to witness such a thing it was hard enough when i was told my brother had been killed but to see your sibling shot and killed right in front of you I can't even imagine. I think her friends will understand that she just wants to be with her family and I hope Matt doesn't take it to heart. Great chapter!
    April 2nd, 2012 at 06:00am
  • I'm so glad tht Shania is alive it's sad to kno tht London died tho.....I'm sure tht Matt will understand for Shania not wanting to see anyone but be with her family at the moment becuz they did lose a family member so he can see her tomorrow.........can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    April 2nd, 2012 at 05:51am
  • i'm in love with your story, seriously~!!!
    that last chapter was so unexpected, but it's very significant.
    now i'm very sad and worried, can't wait for the next update, you come up with great ideas~!!!
    April 1st, 2012 at 05:03pm
  • Holy Shit! 0.0
    I was definitely not expecting that at all!
    I mean London being killed in front of Shania by Rowan of all people.
    Though I did have a small feeling about him because he was being bullied to the extreme, until to the point he snapped and just wanted to take justice into his own hands.
    This really does remind me of the documentary of Columbine Shooting and it was very heartbreaking.
    I feel like crying right now because London is gone and I have no idea if Shania is going to make it.
    I really thought that Rowan would consider Shania a friend but instead he preached about how jocks that like to bully deserves to die and she got shot in the head.
    This really has shocked me to the core!
    Do you a picture of how Rowan looks like?
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    April 1st, 2012 at 04:45am
  • So when I first started reading this chapter I had a feeling something was going to happen and when you said she woke up with a feeling of fear it kind of clicked for me. I can't believe that he shot her sister and her wtf ... she helped him a couple of times but I guess trying to talk him out of it was just as bad in his eyes. I hope everyone else is okay and I'm guessing this since there is a sequel lol. The minute I read "Do you believe in God" I automatically thought of Columbine it's also in "Cassie" by Flyleaf i love that song. I feel bad for kids that get bullied but if it was me and I felt like there was no other way out I'd take my life instead of multiple innocent peoples lives. This was a great chapter but I wasn't expecting it from the previous chapters.
    April 1st, 2012 at 03:10am
  • This so sad I am about to cry. Nobody deserves to die like that. I use to get pick on in high school for being a big girl if was not for friends i will not have make in school. I wish someone help him this could have never happen. I feel so sorry for Shaina had to watch get kill. I hope someone save her.
    March 31st, 2012 at 10:04pm
  • OH MY GOD!
    I can't believe he did that, after everything she did for him.
    Nobody deserves to die like that, nooobody.
    March 31st, 2012 at 08:56pm
  • Shania did so much for Rowan! How could he just shoot the only person who was kind to him? And London... I don't even know what to say about that. I guess when you're on a murderous rampage, you don't think about who was nice to you and who wasn't. Does he commit suicide after that?
    On a lighter note, my sisters middle school has a Bully Response Team. I'm going to try to get one at my High School this week. They just got these bracelets that say SMS bully response team on one side and Make it stop on the other side. They're going to do this thing at their school. Since a kid gets bullied every seven seconds, they're going to do seven seconds of silence for their whole school, and release white balloons at the end. It's going to be really cool. Bullying needs to be stopped. It's wrong and cruel and this is a perfect example of what can happen.
    March 31st, 2012 at 05:40pm
  • OH.MY.GOD. I cannot believe that happened! I didn't want anyone to die!! D: it was good though! And awe :) I am glad that I was missed! lol :) Can't wait for more!
    March 31st, 2012 at 09:55am
  • I read all 27 chapters and I have to say this is an amazing story incredible.......I can't believe tht London died, I also can't believe of all the help tht Shania did for Rowan he still killed people......I hope tht Shania didn't die and I hope tht Matt and the rest of Shania's friends including Keanu are alright and didn't get shoot.......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    March 31st, 2012 at 09:50am
  • I can't believe that London is gone :O
    That broke my heart that she was killed in front of Shania's eye, but she finds out that Rowan was one who shot her.
    March 31st, 2012 at 07:32am
  • I have been reading this quietly for quite sometime....
    O.o
    But I must say nothing more than that chapter made me wanna stomp and bawl like a baby
    March 31st, 2012 at 06:36am
  • No! !!! Tell me this is a dream D; that is so sad I hope she's ok.
    March 31st, 2012 at 06:36am
  • Shania is right Rowan should tell someone what's going on and that's he's being bullied. It's not right that he's going through this,but I'm glad that he met Shania. She'll help him out :)
    Great update
    March 30th, 2012 at 12:16am
  • I can't believe that I missed this much! I loved all the updates! I can't wait for more info on the Rowen kid! I like that you added more conflict between her and Matt, it makes things more real. Also, I am glad to know what people are saying about her. It's kinda dumb on their part, but I am glad that she stuck to her guns. :) Can't wait for more!
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:01am
  • Those girls are just haters they wish that they had someone like Matt
    and the new boys name is Rowan well Rowan you should know that you and Shania are now friends
    March 28th, 2012 at 12:46am
  • Those girls are trying to mess with her head and its not fair D;
    I loved this update!
    Can't wait for more!
    March 27th, 2012 at 11:00pm
  • Man I swear those girls are just trying to mess with Shania and telling all the bad things about Matt's past and comparing herself with him.
    Because she is the total opposite of him, a straight A student and Matt is the the type that does what he wants even though that gets him in trouble.
    And Keanu still isn't talking to her since she started dating Matt.
    I wonder if it's because all the things that he heard about Matt and his group of friends.
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 27th, 2012 at 07:40am
  • Okay so I'm back my ipod needed to be hooked up to itunes so I was fucked for a while lol but now we've got a new laptop thanks to my aunt and uncle lol.

    So Matt and her are back together woohoo! I loved the aquarium scene I love them sea life is kind of like mystic to me idk why makes me think of the secretes of the unknown ... anyways I'm glad that Val talked Matt out of going after Carter that would have just pushed her away. What I would have gave to date any member of A7X when I was still in high school ... sry kinda spaced out then lol. I'm still interested in this blue eyed kid that she keeps running into I know he has a name now but I wanna know more about him. Who is he and why has he been feathered && and what did Matt want to know is he pregnant with her baby lmao?! jk. I seriously love this story can't wait for more!
    March 27th, 2012 at 05:41am
  • I'm loving this story!!
    It's different from every other story on here and that's a good thing!
    I've cried and laughed with this story so far..........I'm sure more is to come....
    I can't wait to see what happens next!
    More soon please!
    March 27th, 2012 at 12:39am