June 28th, 2011 at 08:53pm
Ooo, I like the banner! Though I sort of doubted the title =\ But it's like I was woken up from the summary. I love how you made Winter Wonderland make it sound so... creepy. I like that =D
""I won't be her if you do come.""
^ I think you meant here =)
I admit I was confused at the beginning. I had no clue why Rick was being so strange or what happened. I thought that maybe he had been dumped or something. I had no idea...
Wow, see, this is why I never go anywhere without a seat belt! But, if he was the one not wearing it, why was it the girl who died? That sort of confused me. Plus, in the ending, I don't really understand. Can he see her ghost? Or is Rick only imagining things?
All in all, you did a fantastic job, love! Here's to hoping you win the contest! <3
I love these types of stories. They always kind of start out all confusing and then by then you find... clarity I guess you could say?
I like how there was kind of a... battle inside of him. Between what he thought and what others had a right of. I liked that.
"What good does listening do when you can't understand what a person is really saying?"
I ADORE that line. It's completely true.
And what was Megan to him? Because he said something about her knowing before.
All in all, I loved the story. A lot. Your descriptions were amazing, the imagery it created was great, you flowed perfectly into everything, and it spoke something real to me.(That doesn't sound crazy at all -.-)
Loved it. :}