Maps. - Comments

This is lovely. I loved the way you described how she wanted to feel, what with butterflies in her stomach and not knowing what might happen. I can very much relate to her, and I love how you brought in the ending as a way of making it seem more real, like something that happened rather than just her musings. Great job. :)

I love the layout, especially the colours you used. And that blue line, the colour you picked from the sea in the map, it's just really, really cute.

The descriptions are very good. And the ending is very nice as well. It would be something I'd do. I didn't find any major grammar or spelling errors, so brownie points on that. You'll also be given brownie points for the length. I love short drabbles. And I love this one as well. Great job!

I liked this. I liked the way you described the boring lives of the majority of American citizens, and how she wasn't like all of those other people, content with their 9 to 5 jobs. She reminds me a lot of myself, and I loved how you didn't go into detail about where she had chosen to go. I thought this was very nicely written. Good job. :)