spiderman fic? omg, it's been a very long time since i've seen one of these. that's a brilliant quote you've gotten
uncle ben really did always give the best advice, honestly. i love how peter's coming to terms with it in the way he can, even if he doesn't want to, and how he never realized that mj would be good for him until it was too late. it follows the idea wonderfully.
i love the ending and how lighthearted it almost seems, how peter clearly is going to be trying to make a difference, and overall it was just extraordinarily cute. sad, yeah, but sure. i loved how mj was hesitant to talk in the graveyard, it's just very, very realistic.
uncle ben really did always give the best advice, honestly. i love how peter's coming to terms with it in the way he can, even if he doesn't want to, and how he never realized that mj would be good for him until it was too late. it follows the idea wonderfully.
i love the ending and how lighthearted it almost seems, how peter clearly is going to be trying to make a difference, and overall it was just extraordinarily cute. sad, yeah, but sure. i loved how mj was hesitant to talk in the graveyard, it's just very, very realistic.