Predictable - Comments

I really liked this. I liked how the second line and the last line seemed to be somewhat separate from the rest of the story, almost like they were interrupting the rest of the story. They almost seemed like the main characters thoughts and that they'd just been thrown in there. Despite this, I thought they worked really well and had a clever effect.

The layout of this is beautiful. The picture is stunning and it matches the colours so well. I tend to steer clear of stories where the content background is anything but white, but the colour you've chosen matches everything nicely and is easy on the eyes.

The subject of this drabble also intrigued me, as I've never read anything that was based on something like a card game.

I really liked this. :)

I liked it, but I think it could be so much more. I didn't really like the flow, one line didn't seem to transition well into the next but it did paint a picture in my head. It was a tad confusing and some details weren't there, and I'm not sure if that's what you were going for or not.

The layout picture fits with the story perfectly, though the text background seems a little off and the layout background seems a little too hard for the picture, maybe lighten it up a bit.

Then I always know what to do. And I always win.
She seems vindictive and snotty there and I just love it.

Over all, it was nice, could use a little work, but still, nice. Good job. Keep it up.

I really loved this ^.^
I hope you write more, the way your words flow is incredible!