Stories Yet To Unfold - Comments

"Danielle kind of creeped me out in ways I can’t even explain. I mean who collects fucking dead spiders, I mean really?” I nearly died of laughter reading that.

I like it so far!
The idea that a young guy in a band that's trying to plan a tour has/wants to take care of his younger cousin (well, second cousin) is one that I've never seen done before.
I have a feeling that it's going to give the story a really interesting dynamic as it goes on. maybe even a few lessons will be learned along the way? Guess I'll have to come back to read more and see.
I'm curious to see how it all turns out, what with how hectic band life can be.
I'll definitely be watching for this one. =)

this is really cute. just how Jeff didn't want to see her cry, and how Melissa wasn't like "Well you should take me". she accepted that it was what it was.

and just it was adorable. and collecting dead spiders? grody.

The banner looks pretty cool. :) I like the colors. It was nicely done.

The summary was very well done, too. It seemed to have explained most of what it's going to be about, in my opinion. It's interesting and has a nice introduction. It has a nice, little vague but interesting ring to it. I like that. At the end of it, it left me very curious as to what it's going to be about. Like, father? Unfamiliar? What's going on? I wanna see, let me see! Yeah, like that.

Good job on the summary and layout. :)

-Echo