June 23rd, 2011 at 05:07pm
that last line left me breathless, dear!
You're radioactive and all she ever did was love you.
it makes me wonder how the person you're addressing feels. and you wrote it in such a way where i'm in there place. i feel their guilt, and i just feel so sorry that i caused this girl harm. i can just imagine my own crash and burn. it was beautifully written, as per usual. i always feel happy when i read your stuff (:
Your writing style flows so well and the way you wrote it sounds like it could be a song, and it's amazing. It's like poetry and my mind is kinda scrambled from reading it, but in a good way and I sorta want to read this over and over again. It makes me wonder just what happened that made the girl so broken but at the same time I'd rather not know, because the way it's written seems a bit abstract and it'd be out of place if we knew for sure how it came to be.
But anyways, I'm super glad I stumbled across this.