June 30th, 2008 at 05:37am
Consciousness hits like a ton of bricks, or rather it felt like someone had just bashed me over the head with one. I force my eyes to open as the world blurs around me, disfigured shapes and colours blending together making it impossible to work out where I am.
That's such a descriptive and perfect beginning to the chapter. You can just feel the heaviness and the migraine and the attack of a very bad hangover.
he alcoholic poisons emptying from my body as I gag over the toilet bowel, my stomach feeling like it’s full of lead. I hated this feeling, I hated the feeling of that morning after a long night when you wake up and you don’t remember anything. The only reminder of the night before and the alcohol that had pumped so relentlessly through your veins, was the aching head and the stomach that felt like someone had punched it several times over.
Again, with the dirty hangover imagery. You somehow seem to write so softly, Chel, that seeing you write like, say, Liz or Sara, is a surprising yet refreshing change. There's a grittiness coming into your work, somehow tainting it, yet making it well rounded at the same time.
Her face draws a blank for a moment as she decides on an answer and I wonder why she wastes her time taking a quiz that will ultimately inform her on whether she feels sexy. Because you know, Cosmopolitan holds all the answers to life for a sixteen year old girl...
I like this cynical bit of Rachel, with a somewhat all seeing grip on reality.
I like their understanding of each other, even if they couldn't stand each other at times.
BTW you guys, did you by any chance get the names Leah and Rachel from the sisters in the Bible? Jacob's girls? [yeah, I'm guessing you did :XD] Does it have any significance?
Other than that, yes, me is subscribing.
Yes, I am subscribing, even if it means I must wait a longgg time for chapter three, this is well worth it. The descriptions between the two sisters, of how they seem to know each other so well, is just mind-blowing. And so true.
And so I applaud, pretty loudly. :D