For What It's Worth - Comments

I finally got to reading this. I can't believe you don't have any more comments, this story is amazing, bro. o: It's much better than I thought it would be. It's actually a bit addicting, really.

As I think I told you, the layout is gorgeous. c: I love it, it's cute and the picture's so pretty, it goes well with the rest of the colors in the layout. The size of the font made it hard on my eyes, but I managed. Don't think people wanna manage to read when they do so, but it's still really a good story.

Your details are flawless. c: <3 They really are well done. You can feel what they feel, well, a bit of it, and I can imagine it well in my head as it happens. Of course we must all have that ability, but it's easier with the details you provide that don't crowd our minds much with all the extra shit. It's really good. c: Can't wait to see what happens.

I really hope Carter and Beck patch it up, 'cause Carter's too adorable and kind for her to treat him like that. ;c he's so great. That Hana... I don't like her already.

Update soon!

-Luna

Okay wow.
This is good- I didn't expect it to be because usually in comment swaps I end up
with bad stories, but this is something else.
It's dark at the start and I like that because I'm a very dark person, the descriptions from then on aren't great but it seems to be on purpose to reflect her attitude - and writing in character is something I admire.
All in all, I want to read more (:

Okay, round two of commenting :)

The second half of the story was just as amazing as the first :)
First of all, I adore your layout. It's beautiful and fits the story so perfectly; it sort of sets the mood, ya know?

Second, I just have to reiterate: you develop characters gracefully and flawlessly. I think character development is an art of sorts, and you are painting a masterpiece with these kiddies of yours =D

Third....the plot is brilliant. I've read rape stories before, I've read pregnancy/abortion from rape stories before, but none of them have been this well thought out. You're doing an incredible job with leading this story. And I skimmed over the previous comments, I have to disagree...I really don't think you went to fast with the Carter/Beck relationship. While more detail/expanding on ideas is always better than less, I think the way you did it fits with the whole flow of the story perfectly. In your story, I think writing too much more or taking it slower would seem cumbersome; it just doesn't fit with the pace of everything.

And fourth, finally ;), your writing style as a whole....it's good. It's better than good...it's awesome! There's just something so natural about it. I love your descriptions, they're beautiful, even the ones about hard to handle topics. And I think your word choice is brilliant.

All in all, freaking FANTASTIC story! Please keep writing it because I really want to read more!!!

Okay, I'm only half-way through the story, and I promise to finish reading it as soon as I'm done commenting, but I'm just so in love with it already I had to say something now!

I adore the way you describe characters! You are a mastermind at creating realistic people and describing they're personalities without being obvious about it. It's artsy the way you do it. I like it :)

And now I'm going to go back and finish reading the last four chapters before I finish my critique <3

First of all, I really like the layout, it's so simple yet so pretty! I don't like how it's on the side though, it'll look better in the middle.

I really like your summary, it's brief but it's short and to the point, the reader knows it's a love story so they kind of know what to expect from the story without getting the big picture. :D You managed to find the fine line in between not giving anything away and not giving too much away. :)

Ouch, that guy in the first chapter is a d*ck but certainly very intriguing, I'm most curious to know more. Poor Beck :( That guy has the sleazy charm that girls love to hate but hate to love, ahaha. Ooh, Beck is pregnant? ;o And I agree with the person above me, you could have expanded on Carter and Beck's relationship a bit more. But I do like the intrigue and suspense you've weaved into the story, well done :D

Dearest Cassie, it sucks. Die.
xD I'm kidding, I'm kidding.
I really like this story, and the part where she had the abortion, I was like *slams head on keyboard* xD
I think you could have slowed down a bit with the relationship between Carter and Beck, like you could have expanded it a bit more.
I love how this is written though O.O it's incredible and I hope you keep writing it!
(to be honest, this sounds like something I would write xD)

FIRST COMMENT!(:
Keep writing, I love it! <3