Right Where We Belong - Comments

I love Lord of the Rings! It's great that you made a fan-fic about it. I only read up to the third chapter because I have other stories to comment on but I will definitely suscribe and read the rest of the story. I want to know the reason why they were suddenly drifted apart into different places.

I like your writing style by the way. It's really good! The way you describe things is just...amazing. I didn't see any misspelling except on the first chapter were it says shew as instead of she was Many people hate words that are spelled wrong. I don't really hate them really, or find them anoying... But I thought I should let you know.

The idea for the story is excellent! I love it, I love it, I love it! XD You have a great imagination.

I gotta be honest when it says Annie I picture someone sweet and nice but her personality is the total opposite... For some reason... I like that. I'm weird like that haha :D

I also love the layout! :))

Why am I still the one who comments most on this story? Why, crazy people, why? Yes! The Annie and Haldir argument I have been waiting for! This is great and I feel bad for Jamie getting stuck in the middle of this. I'm sure Haldir means no harm and I don't think he would hurt her during the training. It's good that she learn to fight htough so she can defend herself if the need ever comes. Wow, my grammar is even failing in here. That sucks but oh well. Will the next chapter show the results of said fight? Will Haldir put Annie back in her place and make her realize he is innocent? Well maybe not innocent but over all he doesn't mean to hurt Jamie. Poor Jamie but at least Boromir is there to make her feel better!

This was soo good!!! I can't wait for more!

So may amazing updates all at once! I'm surprised my brain hasn't melted or something. Grima always creeped me out, majorly, all the time, whenever I saw him in the movies or heard a reference. Always. He kind of reminds me of a zombie fish. All white and greasy and creepy looking. Thea should tell Theodred what happened and what was said. Hopefully he can do something about it. BArging into someones room unnanouced or invited is bad enough. Name caling is immature. Threatening them is like asking for an *ss whooping. Grima better watch out. Thordred's going to come with a big and scary sword and knock him off his pedestal. Hahahahaha, that will be awesome!

* fist pumping * Firs butting head moment of the story! And she managed to insult My. Grumpy Warden as well! Oh no, you're not going to make her turn evil are you? I know she's stubborn and clearly not very tolerable with her current predicament but you can't make her evil. It's social suicide O_O Had to get a Mean Girls moment in there but still it would make for an interesting twist in the story but her sisters need her! OhMiGod, theory moment!! What if she turned evil temporarily and then had an epiphany (is that the word) and turned good again! But she would have to do something horrible and work to gain their trust again! I am going to be thinking about this story and what could possibly happen until the end. Then I'm probably going to obsess over the sequals as well. Cheers for entertainment! Suddenly Mibba has gotten soooo much better =)

Cryptic an beautiful at the same time. Jamie was meant to be an elf. Completely, through and through. It's like she was born into the wrong world as the wrong being. Annie, Annie, Annie, chica must be a little more accepting about what's going on. Especially if she goes with the fellowship on their journey! I just realized that I say "especially" a lot. I'll probably continue to say it too because it just goes with the sentence. I can see Thea and Jamie aren't having any trouble fitting in with Middle Earth and will adapt perfectly. It sounds like Aniie on the otherhand is goig to have quite a few problems before she actually realizes that all of this is in fact real. It is happening and there is a possiblity that she will never go back to her original home. Or she could go completely insane for awhile and then realize it and get control of herself. Either way, I can see this may not be an easy transition for her. But, she will be fine. They all will be.

Theo's got a crush on Thea! It sounds that way and this chapter has made me happy agian, though I do dread the coming of my own chapter. I hope my mood doesn't take down the niceness of it. I am wondering when she will be reunited with her sister's though. It's nice that she is able to be happy and not feel like as much o a stranger despite the absence of her sisters. One day, one day. I'm sure they'll be reunited. I don't have much theories when it comes to these two I'm afraid. I kind of hope they don't have to return to their real homes which I'm doubting they will. After spending so much time on Middle Earth I don't see how they would be able to function normally. They would probably run into a grocery store shouting Medieval phrases or something. As funny as it may be I don't think the girls need to be locked up because people think they're nut cases or something. I do love this story. It brightens my day which is more that I can say for some of the ones I read.

This is such a beautiful story!! I absolutely loooovvveeee it!

~~Before Reading Story!!

Yes! The beloved lost chapter has risen! Technically I haven't read it yet but I figured I would get that out there anyway. Gah I have been anticipating this chapter since you told me you started rewriting it!

~~After Reading Story~~

There should be more than 3 subscribers on this story! And right now after reading this all I can literally think it --> !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <-- No lie either. My Warrior... that's so sweet! Eventually this story is going to get so awesome that my comments will be mainly --> O_O !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >.< xD and OMG!! <-- because I will just be so amazed. I can't even explain it. I want to but this old computer would probably explode. I want to mash the keys on the keyboard to attempt to get my excitement and the point across but I'm afraid I may get locked up. The only prediction I can come up with his Annie butting heads with the warden still. It would be like the ultimate Battle of the Sexes, Sarcasm and Insult style! !!!!!!!!!! Boromir shall live?! I've always wondered what his character would be like if he didn't get killed.. That would be awesome! Ohhh I'm anticipating so much from this story! Seriously, when we were walking I could only think about What's going to happen to Jamie, what will be in her chapter?! It's kind of sad but I love it!

They've made it to Lorien! Enter the Grumpy warden, The Silent Wardens and possibly her sister. No, I would think the wardens would keep her locked up tight while they went on patrols. But still! She's that much closer to being reunited, and possibly annoyed with said grumpy warden. There must be a love/hate relationship going on with her and Legolas. It sounds like there is and I'm glad she's getting some amusement out of it. She should just accept that at this point she is stuck with these guys. Despite all of the different creatures running around I'm sure she would probably have more fun in Middle Earth than in the regular world. I've been thinking about that as well. How are they getting back there or will they choose to stay in Middle Earth? It's not like they can bring their new "friends" into the regular world. Both the normal humans and these guys would probably expode or something. That or have a massive spaz attack because of how different the worlds are. It's a funny thought actually.

My computer was taken over for research on Final Fantasy, I am not amused that I had to wait until now to read this chapter. It sounds like Thea is adapting well to being in Rohan. That's where Theodred, Eowyn and Theoden are right? I can never remember the place, I keep wanting to call it Gondor. I blame Boromir for that one. This chapter was so sweet! I'm still curious as to which sister I had wrong as far as pairings are concerned. I still think it's Annie. I think Thea's falling for Theodred but won't she lose him if you do in fact follow his part of the storyline? Hey, there has to be some death in the story I suppose, this is Lord Of The Ring's after all. He made her night with his request, it's great that her spirits seem to have risen. Especially since at this point she probably does believe her sisters are dead. Gah, I can't wait for the next chapter! I can't wait for the rest of them but I will be sad when the ending comes. But that's why I'll keep it in mu subscriptions because them I can read it whenever I want! :)

If I had just witnessed a man get dragged down to hell by some sort of unknown being, I think I would be upset too. Especially if I was getting man handeled. That would make it even worse. As callous as it may have seemed she is right. Wallowing over Gandalfs death isn't going to help them any. If anything it will make them feel worse like it did in the movie. It looks like you are following the path of the main story. I should have realized this before but I didn't and now I have another one of my epic ideas! Two of them are going to meet up at the Council and then somehow they are going to meet up with Jamie and find love on the way. That would be cool, and it would also be cool if they accpanied the fellowship to destory it. Saying I like this story is an understatement. A major one! But that's okay because it means I can read this story over and over and never be bored of it. I don't even have to refuse to be bored with it because I won't I won't be.

I am loving this story! <3 Yea, I finally started reading your stories, Nessa. <3 The layout and banner are both pretty. And I must say, I love the sistes. <3

Telling someone who has suffered from a fever, gotten sick and fallen from said vomit does not want to hear that her sisters are missing. Poor girl is most likely thinking they're dead. Imagine her shock if she manages to meet up with them later in the story. How did she end up with the fever anyway? She must have developed it when they after dropped into Middle Earth. Unless of course she had it beforehand and just didn't realize it. Both reasons would be acceptable and understandable. Okay so Thea + Theodred, Annie + Legolas (maybe, if I was correct with my guess), and Jamie + Haldir? Am I correct? I hope so, the pairings would be perfecto!

Why you kill Gandalf? This was influenced from when they were in Moria wasn't it? With the balrog? I wonder, who could these men have been and what they could have been doing. I was thinking the three of them would be dropped in Middle Earth in the same general area but that would be too easy. Plus all of the situations they will be in trying to find each other will probably be amusing. Attitude wise it sounds like their going to be freaking out for awhile until they're reunited. Curse computer updates and problems or I would have been able to read this sooner! Yay, I'm still the only one commenting so far even though I'm sure other users have discovered this story. Mmm yes, I'm still in love with the awesomess of this story! Next update soon? For acyber cookie! Pretty please =)

Haldir is not amused. but I'm liking where this story is going. I'm curious what she needs to get with him though, there's always an underlying reason for someone to be disconnnected. He definitely fits the part and seems more miserable than angry in this chapter. Are you going to give his brothers a part in the story as well? That would be so cool especially since you could make their personalities whatever you please. Somehow I dont think Annie will be getting along with this man. They'll all meet soon right? I can already see those to butting heads in my own. Funny stuff. I can't wait for the next chapter! And I still get all the commenting rights since I'm the only one! Unless someone is commenting this as well and both of our comments appear but that's okay because I still go tthe first four. =)

Elves! *fangirl moment* Wait a minute, are these elves the Warden's? If you managed to make Haldir the one being all gentle I don't know whether to start fist pumping because he isn't being sarcastic or stare because I don't know what to think. Either way I still love the story. "Little ugly creatures" Might these be the orcish things? When I read the part with the furious leader and the horses I immediately though of Merry and Pippin in the movie. When the men come through and defeat the orcs and the last thing we see is Pippin almost getting stomped on? Except this time is was a girl. This is great so far, I'm getting so many funny images in my head for what could happen next. Could the next chapter possibly be posted soon? Really really soon?

No meeting of the elves and/or other characters yet? So far, this story has been a walking cliff hanger but that is good. Very good because it makes me want to read it more. Why, um, would there be a sword layoing around by chance? One of those things I'm rpobably gonig to find out later and facepalm over most likely. It would be highly amusing if it was left there by mistake and then the real owner was chasing her trying to get it back. That would be really amusing, I would probably laugh hysterically at the thought of it. Even if she does go through this tunnel, I'm going to take another wild guess and say she isn't going to make it back to her sisters right away. By the way, what could they be doing while their sister is tramping around Middle Earth? Unless she hasn't made it there yet and this is just a step before it. Either way, I'm curious and this story is great. Bottom line stuff ya know?

Trails + Rain + This Story In General = Love.

^ It's an important equation that needed to be included in this. I'm calling it now and guessing the elves. Gosh why does this stoy have to be so intriguing? Unless of course it's just me. I have a feeling I would be skipping throuhg the trails and forest too if I still lived by one. They're so peaceful and calm. The beauty they possess is an entirely different story. But as much as I love elves (If they are in fact the ones Jamieknapping) I would still be a bit creeped out. The imagery in this story is absolute love, I should add it to the equation but it's a given fact so I won't. If the imagery could get better than this my computer would probably explode from sheer amazment. Kind of like if Chuck Norris didn't do something that was Chuck Norrisey. Amazing as the first one. I can't wait for the third chapter! If it is an elf, I'm guessing it's Galadriel just because I can't see the Warden's having a gentle voice. Maybe sarcastic in Haldir's defense but certainly not gentle.

First comment! I win.

I love the banner, the layout, and overall everything. I can already tell this tory will be amazing. Not just because it's a Lord Of The Rings fanfic either although that could be part of it. Obviously I will be subscribing because 1.) Said story has something to do wth Lord Of The Rings and 2.) Because hello, you are an amazing writer! Sad, I'm guessing there parents are deceased? Their mom anyway, it sounds as if dad kind of ran off. I'm interested in how you will include Middle Earth in this. Also if it will be before the ring quest, after it or as if it never happened. I hope you post the next chapter soon. I haven't gone to fanfiction.net or read this so I don't know which characters you plan to use. I'm hooked. Hooked, hooked hooked. Hehe, I sense fun stuff happening on the trails. I like Annie, she reminds me of myself. Do I really have to tell you how perfect this is written?