Ahh no! I don't want it to end! I've loved it from chapter 1 and i can't wait to see where this story goes! I lovedall the emotion and ups and downs. Thank U for writing an awesome story!
NO NO NO NO NO It cannot end, I will not allow this to end. It is not fair, I want that to happen. The Sequel. It sounded so good, D': Haylie awww and ZACKY WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY *cries* But ya know, update soon and all that.
As always, a brilliant chapter, and probably the most emotional (at least to me). Knowing that the story has come to an end, and there will be but one epilogue, tugs at my heartstrings-- your planned sequel sounds amazing, but I can understand not doing sequels as they can really wear holes in characters. Can't wait for the epilogue, I can only wonder what it will be... Thank you for writing Crash Into Me. It's been a roller coaster ride, and I hope you create many more epic tales such as this. :)
i'm really not trying to be a bitch or anything, but coming from someone who has followed this story from the beginning, that is a really shitty ending. You should continue or at least post a sequel.
so apparently I was wrong. I guess I hadn't thought of the fact that she's not 18 and can't really fight it even if she wanted to. anyways, this was sad. I feel so bad for them... especially zack.
I can't believe there's only one chapter left. and WHY did you have to say what the sequel would've been, because that sounds like it would've been awesome. haha okay no, as I've said, I totally understand, I'm just being selfish. but hopefully there is a happy ending of sorts... a reunion perhaps? can't wait for the last chapter, yet so sad to see it end.
Noooooo! Haaaaaaay! Come back! >_< I'll make you cookies and buy you boxes, and boxes of very colorful Skittles! I personally volunteer, along with my trusty switchblade, to 'changer Mr.Father person's mind (^__<) I'll even walk for miles, hours, days, and weeks to find a rainbow shitting unicorn! Just come back to Zacky! :O
So yeah...overdramatic moment gone. Good-byes are horrible! I hate them. So sad. When I started reading the A/N I was like "Fuck yess! Sequel!" But then my brain decided to work and figured there'd be no sequel. •__• But eh. I enjoyed this story <3 Can't wait for the last chapter! ^o^
Another amazing chapter! I myself am a little sad that there won't be a sequel, and the idea you had for the sequel that you put in the Author's note sounded awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter, even though it is the last chapter. I really loved this story and you're an amazing writer!
I loved it I'm still bummed out that there won't be a sequel but i still love it X^D I can't wait for the last chapter Can't wait to find out what happens
This had my eyes watering at the very end. I hate goodbyes they're always so sad...its the one reason why I've always hated saying the word. But this was beautiful and I can't wait for the epilogue. Great Job!
Wow. I really cried while reading this, it was really sad. It sucks that Haylie had to leave, but not all good things in our life stick around. I am so happy you wrote this story and shared it with us, because it was definitely one amazing story! I love having stories end like this, and then having to think of happily ever after ending in my head, but instead of leaving it at this chapter, I plan on seeing what your creavtive mind came up with the epilouge. :)
In total honesty, I would like you to know that you have became one of my favorite Author's on this website. You inspire me so much, and I hope one day my writing can be good as your's, so thank you for creating all of your stories. Including this one, which was the story that I first found from you. It's sad to see it end, but it's also amazing to see a beautiful master piece come together as well.
Can I just tell you how emotional I felt reading this chapter? And for a couple of different reasons.
One, because she's really leaving. Like I said in my comment for the last chapter, I always worried she would have to go and I think I knew that she would, since he's her legal guardian and fighting that would be pointless. But that doesn't make it any easier, does it? Leaving her life behind, her family and new friends, to live with a man she barely knows after everything that she's been through...I can't even imagine it.
Secondly, I'm tearing up because this is the end. There's one more chapter, I know, but still. I adore this story, and I am going to miss it like crazy. That being said, I think the way that you ended it is perfect. I'm not necessarily a fan of open endings because I'm the type of person that has to know what happens or I go mad, but this...this ending I do love. Because I'm going to believe that everything is going to turn out the way that I want it to. At least until next week when we get the epilogue.
You have no idea how much knowing there's only two chapters left is killing me. I feel like once this is over, there's going to be a huge hole in my heart.. On a happy note, I loved the chapter. As I always do. It was nice to see the gang have some fun before Haylie got the horrible news. I literally screamed out "NO!!" when I read that last part. I don't want her father to be found yet.. At this point I'm just hoping, for selfish reasons, that you don't end it like the original. But even if it does end that way, I'll still love this story. I can't wait to read the last two chapters and see how this wonderful story ends! <3