Firstly, that really was a cutesy teen love story. I liked how you kinda described the picture at one point in the story. I thought added to the story. You also did a good job of making this story feel like summer. This kinda stuff only happens in summer. Hah. I also liked the little twist with them having to break up, but they met again when they were adults. That's so sweet. I think you did a great job.
Firstly, that really was a cutesy teen love story.
I liked how you kinda described the picture at one point in the story. I thought added to the story.
You also did a good job of making this story feel like summer. This kinda stuff only happens in summer. Hah.
I also liked the little twist with them having to break up, but they met again when they were adults. That's so sweet.
I think you did a great job.