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  • Juno

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    great story.
    March 27th, 2012 at 06:44pm
  • MusicMonsterXx

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    Just found this story. It's amazing. Write more, please? :D
    December 5th, 2011 at 10:45pm
  • Frozen.Undies

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    Shia Labeouf is amazing :)
    November 29th, 2011 at 11:35pm
  • CallusedSilk

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    This was a good chapter, made me even more intrigued. And also, since you've given me permission to do so, I'm going to point out that you used the word 'board' instead of 'bored'.

    All in all, you're an amazing writing since the only times I catch errors are when you accidentally use actual words that look or sound similar to the word you're wanting to use, which I think everyone does at least once. xD
    November 15th, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • CallusedSilk

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    Just now started reading this and I'm intrigued. Especially since I know that the happiness can not last and shit will hit the fan.
    September 3rd, 2011 at 06:53am
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    this is awwweeesome, puhhlease update soon.
    Miyuh
    July 24th, 2011 at 05:09am
  • looking for alaska.

    looking for alaska. (100)

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    Update this soon or I might cry.
    July 7th, 2011 at 10:20am