There was no way I could read this and not comment. The first paragraph cemented that for me. I like the narrator's actual thoughts after what they'd written on the note. {Oh, yeah, I'm referring to the narrator in plural because I don't want to write "he/she."} Gosh, that ending. It was so right. I like how crisp and clean it is.
My favorite lines:
Well, not quite. I love how after this great description of pain, so great you can almost feel it, that the narrator adds this. It's like they realize how over-dramatic they're being and have to shrug and concede that it's not as bad as they're describing it as.
No, you don't wear shoes during sex, and you don't wear shoes when you're about to kill yourself.
I like the narrator's actual thoughts after what they'd written on the note. {Oh, yeah, I'm referring to the narrator in plural because I don't want to write "he/she."}
Gosh, that ending. It was so right. I like how crisp and clean it is.
My favorite lines:
Well, not quite.
I love how after this great description of pain, so great you can almost feel it, that the narrator adds this. It's like they realize how over-dramatic they're being and have to shrug and concede that it's not as bad as they're describing it as.
No, you don't wear shoes during sex, and you don't wear shoes when you're about to kill yourself.
My rambling is distracting me from looking down.
Bad habit. Old habit.
3. 2. 1. Jump.