When the Moon Fell in Love With the Sun - Comments

Of Sam and Squidgy (100)

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"YOU DONT DRINK COFFEE?!" hehehe love this :)
so akward and gah cant even describe

May 13th, 2012 at 06:44am

annabelgoddard (100)

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i love this so far, how she gets awkward is funny and really relateable

April 2nd, 2012 at 11:55pm

hermione41 (100)

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I like where this is going and I like the character, I'm interested to see where you take this : )

December 3rd, 2011 at 12:21am

Pepper. (100)

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I love this :). Super cute. Hope you update soon love :)<3
xox

October 29th, 2011 at 03:47am

the god of mischief. (250)

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Normally, I'm not one for made-ups in stories, let alone girl on guy.

However, I must say that the way you write is very, very good. Where you put in your pauses and stops, it fuels it forward. Just be careful of your punctuation; I've noticed a few missing periods.

~Love and best hopes,
Spinny.

September 30th, 2011 at 04:21am

TheSun (100)

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I like this. I am interested to see where you go with it. Hope you update soon.

August 21st, 2011 at 06:55pm

katsing96 (100)

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Seriously, can't wait for the next update!!! And I can't wait to see where this story will go!!! :)

July 18th, 2011 at 02:57am

katsing96 (100)

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HEY!!! So far, I like the idea of story sounds pretty good so far! I would love to see where this ends up!!! :) Please keep writing!!! Can't wait till the update!!!

July 11th, 2011 at 05:23am