One of the main things that jumped out at me with this story was how realistic it is. Your characters are so utterly believeable. They're not outcasts or stranger people or people who would be seen as weird in the school, like a lot of romance/school stories fall into. Cassie Kay is really smart and also believable, as are all of your other characters, no matter how major or minor. Simple things like the Mexican pizza trivia really add up to make this one of the most believable stories I've read online, and it's only the first few chapters. Your attention to detail is remarkable, and your characters are so three-dimensional. You should be really proud of this.
June 12th, 2012 at 03:57am