Punishment - Comments

How could I not read this one, seriously? The title was Punishment for pete’s sake, and then I got to see the sexy layout. Again, I know nothing about Doctor Who…but these Time Lord dudes sound pretty cool, just saying. I really, really, reaaaaaalllly (I can’t stress that enough) love the contrast between these two. I love the destruction of most of mankind, and the fact that this deliciously sexual oneshot has a plot and background! :D That makes Haven a happy camper. ;) I enjoyed the sex scene and all, but I felt like it could have had more detail. Not the sex scene itself, but just details about what they looked like and what they felt and such. I felt bad for the Doctor there. D: Also, the last paragraph had a lot of choppy sentences that made the flow stagger in the end.

I still liked it though.

<3 Haven

So for my Slash contest, I decided to start the comment on your entry, because let's face it, we know how I love Doctor Who fic and it's been so hard for me not to comment on it beforehand. :D First off, I love the layout; the background and the font color go really well together. And where on Earth did you find that picture? :O I must admit that I don't know too much about The Master at this point but I'll try to keep up. :D

I feel like it would have helped me a bit to have seen these two interact on the show, because it seems as if their relationship changed a bit abruptly. I was expecting the Doctor to fight back against the Master, after their beginning dialogue (which was great, by the way) but nonetheless, moving on. :)

Overall, I thought that this was a good piece but that the character's relationship bounced around a little bit too much. One moment, the Doctor was all over the Master and then the next, he was sobbing. I think that it could easily work but there just needed to be a bit more explaining done. Good luck in the contest and good luck in the Sex It Up contest as well, which should be judged soon! :D

Unexpected bathtub sex! Yay!

Me likes, Rachel :)

Though, my dyslexia caused me to read "Master" as "Martha" a few times, and I was like, "...wut? "

I really liked the beginning dialogue though. It was really in character :D