Just Smile - Comments

Wow, this was so cute. I love this, it brought some joy into my day, considering I'm really sick. I mean, ugh, I wasn't expecting it to end this way. It was so...perfect. You're an amazing writer. wow.

It's very cute and sweet. I don't like how those certain mainstream songs were in the story but all in all cute. Your words flowed nicely and even though it was a tad cliche it was sweet. The layout was so EFFIN' CUTE. Awww. I really said aww and my brother was like, "What?".

All in all I like the centered text and the placing of paragraphs and how it's not ONE GIANT PARAGRAPH. I hate that.

Nice, sweet.

This was really sweet and cute. You made it very personal and realistic and I liked that a lot. The layout was so cutesy that I could scream! Everything about this was wonderful and I found myself smiling the entire time. It was just a very easy, cute read, you know? I like how you incorporated the boy and girl together in the end. I found that to be especially cute. You did a great job with this!

I agree with Severus Snape, your layout was absolutely adorable. I can get really turned off a story by the layout, but your layout made me want to read it straight away. I loved how the lyrics were incorporated into the story and I loved the end, the last paragraph is asdfghghjkl so cute! Your grammar w\as good, and the story flowed nicely, well done!

I don't know how this has no comments, but I'm delighted to be the first to tell you that I loved this, indefinably. The layout was spectacular, so cute - those little earphones xD and the way you had the text centered added to the layout. It was well done.

I love how personal this felt ; it was realistic. You use good grammar and are very realistic. I can relate to everything you wrote which drew me in to the story even more. Awesome work!