Reading my first Klaine fic and it’s one I’m not sure how to feel about. On the one hand, I defintiely like the whole ‘a moment in time’ concept, how you just take a moment in two boys’ life and tell about it. It’s short, but nice. On the other hand, I cannot see Kurt and Blaine have this conversation. In my head they’ll always be two sweet innocent teenage boys in love. <i>Him sucking your cock and rubbing you until you shoot in his mouth.</i> is just not a sentence I can see come out of Kurt mouth.
Content aside (cause after all, that is personal taste), I do think you are a good writer. The way you take a simple situation and portray it with few words to something interesting is very nice to read!
Content aside (cause after all, that is personal taste), I do think you are a good writer. The way you take a simple situation and portray it with few words to something interesting is very nice to read!