This was very good. It was well written, and it had the perfect amount of description. I had a vivid image in my head of everything you said, and even though you described it as very graphic, it's good to have good descriptions. You have a nice writing style, and it flows perfectly. The layout is something I've never seen before--the story area had those little blocks sticking out of it aha. The banner was nice as well, and it's smart that you had it edited, because I saw few grammar and spelling mistakes. It was sad how Joseph raped and killed those girls...:( You used Dexter's personality on his television show exactly the same on this story, and that's a plus! :D Nice job.
July 20th, 2011 at 01:55am