Yellow Paper & Black Ink - Comments

so i finally got on and checked on this story, and i was like "whoa theres a chapter dedicated to me?" :D badass! i really liked it. there was this one part, though, that said "she child looked horrified," im guessing you meant "the child".

haha still this is a good story! there needs to be more subscribers.

If I could know who subscribed to my story I'd be worshiping them right now.

im so intrigued, the poem was amazing first of all and now i cant wait to read more of this.

You seeing dead people man? Cause that's how it seems.